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I’m nothing more than what they’ve made of me
So I stand naked in the mist of the crowd
A living breathing painted statue
Here for your viewing pleasure and sensual amusement

Lying still as you penetrate
I breathe out a throaty moan
Our eyes never meet

My body’s broken
Suffering from overuse and
Malnourishment
My soul despairs
I’m light turned to darkness

Numb

My body lies for me
As we go about this business
Pseudo love
Priced high enough to feed starving children
But we are all starved for something in one way

Touch

Bleeding on the inside
Filling up the holes
I’m purchased for hours
My body is my greatest tool

And I’m nothing more than what they’ve made of me

Numb… Broken…Bleeding

Statue
©2006-2009 ~SkyLamour
:iconskylamour:

Author's Comments

I worked on this poem for a long tyme. I've had the first stanza done for months before the rest came to me. I'm reeally proud of this one.

Comment tell me what you think!

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:iconwickeddetourr:
That is AMAZING!!

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~Our mind is the most powerful and effective, yet dangerous, tool we can posses. It can be our best friend and our worst enemy~
Annony
:iconskylamour:
thank you :)

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Razors pain you; Rivers are damp; Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp. Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give; Gas smells awful; You might as well live."
-Dorothy Parker
:iconbluedannylew:
Very :cool:

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Anon needs to get over itself.
:iconskylamour:
thanks I worked hard on this one!

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Razors pain you; Rivers are damp; Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp. Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give; Gas smells awful; You might as well live."
-Dorothy Parker
:iconbewareofthesnowman:
wow i love it!!! its all just so clever, and very deep and i love the contrast between her apparent detachment towards sex and how she is affected bybeing used like that, i only wish you could give stuff more than just one fav...

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Hiss, shout, kick my teeth in, so what? I shall still tell you that you are half-wits. In three months my friends and I will be selling you our pictures for a few francs
- Manifeste cannibale dada
:iconskylamour:
hehe thanks danno :D

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Razors pain you; Rivers are damp; Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp. Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give; Gas smells awful; You might as well live."
-Dorothy Parker
:iconbewareofthesnowman:
you're most welcome

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Hiss, shout, kick my teeth in, so what? I shall still tell you that you are half-wits. In three months my friends and I will be selling you our pictures for a few francs
- Manifeste cannibale dada
:iconbluedannylew:
it shows

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Anon needs to get over itself.
:icongeophilus:
splendid and fatal! (a good mix)

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